1) My best scene was when the main character, Chelsea, decides to go against the rules and go to the fashion showing that her new boss was supposed to attend.
2) My worst scene was when she finally arrived at the fashion show, because I should have elongated the scene or gave more detail about why she was so excited to go to the show and that it was out of character for her to do something like that.
3) I could give more detail about the setting of the scenes, and more detailed dialogue or description of why Chelsea does what she does and a better background of her life.
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